It batters you with its storm,
Till it you are thoroughly worn.
It empties you of emotion,
Then it drowns your spirit in its ocean.
But I wont be that shell upon the shore,
I won’t let it beat me anymore.©
11 thoughts on “Not be beaten”
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This is so handsome.
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Hello.
Good for you!
A strong message indeed.
Nice imagery.
Thanks for sharing.
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I adore poetry which says so much in a few words. I wish you well in your decision 🙂
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great powerful decision-great write
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what a charming piece.
well done.
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As one who has been there and done that, I say a huge Amen to this! Superbly said – I loved it. Blessings, Terri
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Very strong message; very well said. Nicely done!
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yes, one must be strong in many different ways. a peaceful knowing provides this inner strength. lovely poem, thank-you, hugs, pat
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very well done.
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Thanks for that
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The prose and structure of this poem is really admirable. It’s powerful, moving, uplifting, inspiring, wall-breaking. Thank you for writing and sharing this.
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