Burnt orange leaves falling
From the trees
Like the red hot tears falling
While she grieves ©
25 thoughts on “autumn grief”
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Burnt orange leaves falling
From the trees
Like the red hot tears falling
While she grieves ©
Comments are closed.
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Greetings:
Hope all is well.
Noting that you have won the perfect poet award for week 58,
what an achievement, thanks for your outstanding contribution to us
along the way, keep up the excellence. Best!
Come join our poetry rallyby Friday if you wish to mingle and get inspired!
A poem of your choice or a free verse is accepted.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.
Looking forward to seeing you share.
Respect and hugs.
xoxox
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It takes a lot of talent to make four lines poetic and memorable – good job!
http://www.benjity.wordpress.com
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Beautifully crafted four lines which is aptly termed poetry.
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I like that! I have one called “tears of burnt orange” 🙂
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Hello.
My first time visiting from Thursday Poets Rally.
Vivid imagery & very touching words.
Thanks for sharing.
Your Song Of Love
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Perfect rhyme! Beautiful and sad…
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Beautiful
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I can picture her in the window feeling how her tears play a perfect dance with the falling of the leave´s beat.
Happy Rally!
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short yet it touches the heart… beautiful and powerful write
http://thepoetrywagon.blogspot.com/2011/09/nightly-tale.html
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Autumn leaves let go as sometimes so must we. Beautifully put.
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I guess the fall is very beautiful. Yet here it is still summer, yet cooler thank goodness.
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purfect piece, the imagery is sad and powerful.
🙂
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Wow, this is brilliant.
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There is a strange grandeur in the beauty of the variegated colors of Autumn, yet the emotional state depicts grief and it is the time of The Fall and Loss.Beautifully expressed.
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love it,
orange beauty.
🙂
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Very impressive, i am not big into Haiku’s but this has to be the best one i have ever read. Props major.
Shoeless
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nice haiku.. my thursday.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/09/21/human-race-human-waste/
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Autumn normally is a happy time of year for the changes to take place but for some it is sad when life leaves the trees and the leaves fall to the ground. Some people do not like change and it makes them so sad.
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/21/remember-the-years/
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Is this a tanka? It’s good!
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Not sure but thanks!
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Beautifully sad.
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picture and poem work together to show the pain of grief…burnt orange leaves and red hot grief….sadness written with beauty
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Beautiful image and words to match. Nicel one!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/21/in-the-blink-of-an-eye/
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This is very impressive, the poem and the image.
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Rachel,
Beautiful link with the burnt orange and red hot, so sad but wonderful lines. Maire x
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