25 thoughts on “autumn grief

  1. Greetings:

    Hope all is well.

    Noting that you have won the perfect poet award for week 58,
    what an achievement, thanks for your outstanding contribution to us
    along the way, keep up the excellence. Best!

    Come join our poetry rallyby Friday if you wish to mingle and get inspired!

    A poem of your choice or a free verse is accepted.

    Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.

    Looking forward to seeing you share.
    Respect and hugs.
    xoxox

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  2. I can picture her in the window feeling how her tears play a perfect dance with the falling of the leave´s beat.

    Happy Rally!

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  3. There is a strange grandeur in the beauty of the variegated colors of Autumn, yet the emotional state depicts grief and it is the time of The Fall and Loss.Beautifully expressed.

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  4. Very impressive, i am not big into Haiku’s but this has to be the best one i have ever read. Props major.

    Shoeless

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  5. Rachel,
    Beautiful link with the burnt orange and red hot, so sad but wonderful lines. Maire x

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