A pretty little package of a poem Funny– first I pictured an elegant lady in hat and perhaps white gloves, thinking of the “white icing” you begin with, even though I did get the snow association– then I’m like, oh yeah, THAT kind of hat and gloves, for serious outdoor time, such as skiing. It’s nice how much so few words can evoke, even in different directions of thought and association. Thank you for entering this.
fine haiku
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Enjoy the chilly weather. 🙂
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nice description of nature ~
http://a-sweetlust.blogspot.com/2011/12/christmas-star.html
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Thank you all!
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A pretty little package of a poem Funny– first I pictured an elegant lady in hat and perhaps white gloves, thinking of the “white icing” you begin with, even though I did get the snow association– then I’m like, oh yeah, THAT kind of hat and gloves, for serious outdoor time, such as skiing. It’s nice how much so few words can evoke, even in different directions of thought and association. Thank you for entering this.
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Enjoyed this very much 🙂
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i love how you call it white icing! what a wonderful description for the sweetness of winter! lovely pen!
http://magicinthebackyard.wordpress.com/2011/12/15/on-the-dock-where-summer-lied/
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great ad compact.
well done.
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Lovely, short and sweet. You’re my nomination for this week.
http://halfwaybetweenthegutter.wordpress.com/2011/05/16/late-night-cafe/
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Wow, “white icing”! I like it.
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Excellent. I like this!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/12/14/a-thousand-candles/
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Succinct and nicely written. : )
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lol, loved this one with its “icing” ! Blessings, Terri
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Awesome image with no wasted words 🙂 Perfect!
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When I see the tops going white, I know it wont be long until it arrives at my door.
Great piece for the time of year.
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and the mountain is a big cake
http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2011/12/09/nano-informatics/
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Brief but, neatly written
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made me feel cold and hungry for cake lol
happy rally!!!!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/12/14/discomfort/
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short & exact
nice piece.
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