The very first issue of Failed Haiku !

 

So pleased to be part of the very first issue of Failed Haiku this year!

 

http://www.haikuhut.com/FailedHaikuIssue13.pdf

 

 

a new year

still the same excuse

on your lips

 

 

winter moon

your unfinished crossword

on the nightstand

 

 

childhood room

the musty smell

of my younger self

 

 

Rachel Sutcliffe

Failed Haiku January 2017

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6 thoughts on “The very first issue of Failed Haiku !

  1. Great set!

    a new year
    still the same excuse
    on your lips

    Ah yes, sometimes we don’t realise our lips tell others what we really say. ๐Ÿ˜‰

    winter moon
    your unfinished crossword
    on the nightstand

    Intriguing. This could be a play on words that you and the moon, or rather the ‘moon’ couldn’t complete the crossword even though it was a very long sleepless night. Lots of depth, and interpretation.

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